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Start with the part of the scene you’re trying to understand. The nine entries below have full working instructions. Farther down are draft tools from the department charters and operations drawn from the manuscript exercises. Each tool gives you something to keep steady, something to change, and a way to decide what the draft needs next.
Proposed means the test is defined. Run means a comparison has been recorded. The runs below are model checks and still await review. A result can be undetermined if the draft leaves the question open.
Find a tool
What could the witness actually see?
When should the reader learn what happened?
When does the last way back close?
When do two wants start getting in each other’s way?
When does accumulated cost change what someone does?
Does the defence create the reason to use it again?
What becomes impossible if I take one thing out?
Who or what carries the past into this scene?
How can the same act earn two verdicts?
Aperture and occlusion
Optics (story layer) · Proposed
What could the witness actually see?
Keep steady. the act itself, beat for beat
Change. where the witness stands. what is between witness and act. how much the opening exposes
Look for. what the witness can credibly say they saw, split by part of the act (reach, grip, lift, conceal, exit), and what they cannot establish. On The Take: whether the boy can say he saw Ida take the object, or only that he saw her with it.
Revision. move the witness, move the obstruction, or restage the act so the part that matters falls inside or outside the opening
Exposure
Optics (reader layer) · Proposed
When should the reader learn what happened?
Keep steady. what the boy sees and when, in story time. everything Ida does and knows
Change. when the reader learns the boy saw
Look for. whether learning about the sighting later changes how the reader understands Ida’s choice, beyond updating their facts
Revision. move the reveal earlier or later. if there is no change, give the sighting more consequence
From Ida’s case. Model readers suspected the boy before the reveal without being certain. One inferred the reflection from the setup. The human packets now test whether the reveal changes how readers understand Ida’s choice and whether readers understand what Ida knew. Each reader sees one version. Human results are pending.
Trajectory
Kinematics · Proposed
When does the last way back close?
Keep steady. the take and the sighting as separate beats
Change. when the sighting happens relative to the point where Ida could put the object back
Look for. when Ida loses the chance to undo what she has done, and which beat closes it
Revision. move the closing beat earlier or later, or give her a way back
Angle between wants
Geometry · Run (model judge, awaiting review)
When do two wants start getting in each other’s way?
Keep steady. the scene’s events
Change. one condition (Leck in the room, boy knows the object, Ida paid yet, or whether Leck needs Ida to acknowledge the delivery before she goes)
Look for. which pair of wants changes category (pulling together, pulling apart, independent), and at what beat conflict actually starts
Revision. the condition that turns coexisting wants into obstruction
From Ida’s case. One model judge located the first obstruction at the door when Leck requires acknowledgment. Ida’s wish to leave unremarked came from the spec, so the draft still needs to show what acknowledgment costs her.
Latent heat
Thermodynamics · Proposed
When does accumulated cost change what someone does?
Keep steady. the routine (Ida’s “no drift”)
Change. the number of repetitions and the stakes of each
Look for. the first beat where accumulated cost changes what she does, as opposed to how she feels. Costs can pile up without a loop. this tool does not need one. If an answer creates something new to hide and the accumulated cost eventually changes her behavior, that is Latent heat.
Revision. move the break earlier or later by changing what an earlier repetition costs
Recursive trap
Thermodynamics · Proposed
Does the defence create the reason to use it again?
Keep steady. the defense (Ida’s “no drift”)
Change. the turn of the loop: what the defense does when the threat returns
Look for. whether Ida says “no drift” again because of the problem her previous answer created. A new thing to hide establishes a consequence. The loop closes only when the draft shows that problem driving the next answer.
Revision. break the loop where the defense creates the new problem, or where she reads that problem as a reason for the same defense
Removal test
Department open · Proposed
What becomes impossible if I take one thing out?
Keep steady. the scene
Change. one element removed (a person, a condition, or a prior act)
Look for. whether the element is necessary for a move to be available. If something can no longer happen, the element does work. If nothing changes, it is background.
Revision. keep and sharpen the element, cut it, or move its function to something else
Reach of the past
Geology · Run (model judge, awaiting review)
Who or what carries the past into this scene?
Keep steady. Leck knows Ida from before her Shedding. she cannot remember that life. the details of their connection stay open
Change. one present-day condition that lets the past exert pressure (for example, a booking process that lets Leck ask for Ida by name versus one that assigns the next available Clearer)
Look for. what reaches Ida from the earlier life, and through whom or what. Whether Leck finds another way to get her, accepts whoever comes, or abandons the request.
Revision. change who can act on a memory after someone else has lost it, or change the condition through which the past reaches the present
From Ida’s case. Changing how Leck books the job can leave Ida with the same name and date while giving a third person a trace of the booking. That person and the booking detail were constructed for the test. Their usefulness in the story is open until the trace matters in a later beat.
Frames and verdicts
Relativity · Run (model judge, awaiting review)
How can the same act earn two verdicts?
Keep steady. one provisional ending (Ida walks out with the object). the action, its order and what each person knows
Change. the standard used to judge the act. Ida’s trade asks whether everything that had to be cleared was accounted for. Leck asks whether the object got out.
Look for. each verdict, the rule that produces it, and the detail in the draft that lets the reader apply that rule. Whether the scene supports both readings or one needs an invented rule or extra fact.
Revision. establish the missing rule or fact earlier in the story, or revise the detail the verdict hangs on
From Ida’s case. In the provisional exit, Ida fails by her trade’s inventory rule and succeeds by Leck’s standard for getting the parcel out. Delivery is still undetermined. The rule requiring owner set-asides to appear on the sheet was constructed for this run.
More tools in development
These are draft operations. Try them where they fit and see whether they suggest a useful revision. Some may turn out to be versions of the same tool.
Geology
Superposition. Hold the present scene. remove one lower layer. Look for whether the upper layer’s behavior changes.
Unconformity. Hold the record. mark where it breaks. Look for what the edges of the gap constrain.
Core sample. Hold one scene. read down through every layer. Look for where the evidence runs out.
Index fossils. Hold Ida. remove the surviving trait. Look for whether Leck still recognizes her.
Fault lines. Locate the break before the triggering scene. Look for where history gives way under pressure.
Geography
Least-cost path. Hold the goal. lower the cost of the refused route. Look for whether the refusal is shadow or law.
Borders. Name the routes the shadow won’t cross. Look for Whose border it is.
Topography. Map high and low ground. Look for where the character is capable and exposed.
Route availability. Hold a path. vary who walks it. Look for why it is open to one person.
Field Theory
Induction. Hold the scene with the cause (Leck’s request) absent. change one thing that might give the boy a reason to act. Look for whether the new condition gives a reason to act (he could already act and now chooses) or a way to act (access he lacked). Only the first is a clean Induction result.
Shielding. Hold the pressure. change who is protected. Look for why scrutiny falls differently on different people.
Inverse-square law. Move a supporting character nearer or farther. Look for how their leverage changes.
Mediator particles. Change the go-between. Look for what pressure survives the trip.
Superposition. Pair two supporting characters. Look for whether they amplify or cancel.
Geometry
Axioms. List the assumptions behind winning. change one. Look for what the character’s idea of winning rests on.
Intersection. Hold two wins. find the shared outcome. Look for whether wins ever collide.
Closed and open figures. Ask whether the character believes the story closes. Look for whether the ending is available to them.
Kinematics
Time dilation. Hold the span. change who is waiting. Look for who can wait.
Period and frequency. Treat a recurring event as a clock. Look for what interval each character lives by.
Phase. Put two rhythms in or out of step. Look for where they collide.
Interception. Hold what A knows. change when B learns it. Look for when B catches up.
Latency. Change how long a character takes to act on what they learn. Look for where the delay costs them.
Mechanics
Lever and fulcrum. Hold the characters. change the pivot object. Look for whether the weaker can move the stronger.
Conservation of momentum. Track a pressure through a collision. Look for where it went.
Equilibrium. Find what holds a stalled scene still. Look for the hold.
Elastic and inelastic collisions. Name the collision kind. Look for whether characters change.
Impulse. Compare one sharp move to steady pressure. Look for which changes the next move. Crossing with Kinematics.
Thermodynamics
First law. Hold the tactic. ask where the cost went. Look for who is paying now.
Second law. Track what the system must now keep straight. Look for the load a repeated move adds.
Phase transition. Find the threshold. Look for where coping becomes something else.
Heat transfer. Change how a cost spreads. Look for who else carries it.
Optics
Resolution. Change what the witness knows to look for. Look for what they can tell apart.
Refraction. Change the chain an account passes through. Look for how the account bends.
Polarizing filter. Change what the record admits. Look for what the record can say about her life.
Relativity
Invariant, Frames, Transformation key. Hold the event. change the standard. Look for what the identical event means under each.
Simultaneity. Change what counts as the cause. Guardrail: events and order hold, attribution moves. Look for whether the cause is a matter of standard.
Operations from the manuscript exercises
The exercise numbers identify where each idea came from. This section includes open matches and possible overlaps.
Timing of a beat relative to an event. EX138 (recognition relative to victory), EX149 (ending offered before necessity), EX157 (integration relative to damage). All hold the action and move when it arrives. Exposure and Trajectory are timing variables too, so decide whether these are instances of one tool or stay separate because they learn different things. Present answer: separate, because they answer different questions.
Witness response test. EX042 holds the event and varies whether the witness response is present, withheld or corrupted. Learns whether the character’s internal story is confirmed, collapses or stays unproven. Different from Aperture.
Unwitnessed act. EX119 removes the audience at the decisive moment. Learns whether the character can choose without a reflection. Resembles a removal test (audience removed) but learns about the character’s condition, not whether the element does work. Check against row 7.
Wrong witness. EX121 holds the event and the needed function, changes the function the available witness provides. A mismatch becomes plot.
Variable-change pass. Hold the collision, change one of object, tempo, permission, witness, power or field. EX090 to EX094 and EX099 to EX104. This is the instrument model run on six Mechanics variables. EX090 is also a removal test.
Inheritance transaction and three carriers. EX129 to EX132 (Heirloom, Ghost Role, Doctrine). A Geology operation with no charter concept. May be what Geology’s thin concepts are missing. EX132 teaches tracing a fear across carriers. Run 5’s K3 produced a carrier (Orrin Vell) without using these. read EX129 to EX132 against it.
Witness functions: Validator, Mirror, Scribe. EX022, EX123. Overlaps Polarizing filter and Aperture. EX123 is confirmed under Polarizing filter. Check whether the three functions give a different answer from Aperture.
Cast functions: Amplifier, Translator, Catalyst. EX110 to EX114. Field Theory’s strongest set. Amplifier test is a removal test. Catalyst test adds a character instead.
Two contracts, five conditions, betrayal patterns. EX133 to EX135. Relativity’s strongest set. EX133 is the setup for the Transformation key.
Container selection. EX004, EX033, EX037, EX038. Geometry’s set. Burn Test and Temporary Container Shift look like operations.
Failure State catalog, loops and accelerants. EX057 to EX063. Behind the Recursive trap (EX057 to EX061) and Latent heat (EX062, EX063, EX013).
Three clocks and layered clocks. EX076, EX148. Maps to Period and frequency and Phase.
